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苗春喜 女,中学英语一级教师,衡水市优秀教师；多年来在省级以上报刊《人民教师论坛》《科海故事博览》等刊物上发表多篇论文并获奖；曾在第四届全国中小学生素质教育英语知识能力竞赛中荣获优秀辅导教师奖.

My father is a farmer. He is now fortyfive years old. Because of years of hard work, he looks old① than his age.

When I was young, he is used to② tell me the importance of study. Father knows little about English and other subjects, but he usually gives me some good advice on how to learn my lessons good③. He is not only kind to me but also very strict with me. With his help, I have made great progress.

I will never to④ forget what he taught me. I think my father is the best father in the world.

河北省阜城縣古城中学九年级（1）班 李东雷

1. 优点：

本文主题鲜明,段落层次清楚.先写了父亲的外貌形象,然后重点写了父亲对我的学习的影响,字里行间流露出对父亲的敬爱之情.小作者巧妙地运用了多个时态,使用了大量短语.尤其是文章句式结构的多变体现了作者不凡的语言功底.

2. 需要修改的地方：

①old改为older.因其后有表示比较的than,old应使用其比较级.

②去掉is.比较：used to do意为“过去经常做等”,be used to do意为“被用于等”.

③good改为well.修饰动词要用副词,不用形容词.

④去掉to.因助动词will后要接动词原形,不能接不定式.

3. 评分：

按中考英语作文满分20分的标准,本文修改前可得18分.

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